The42n8s1
Monday, May 31, 2010, 03:20 PM
Posted it all here (script and each page in chronological order):
http://thefirstfivecomic.blogspot.com/
There are 17 pages of an intro story (which will be combined with 5 pages of character art) to make up a 22 page first issue. This issue is the first of a five-issue arc that I just finished the script for.
I would sincerely appreciate feedback.
Preference given to civil but brutally honest comments.
Basically I want to know if everything makes sense (it makes perfect sense in my head), if what you see is compelling enough to make you want to read Issue #2, and if its worth printing up copies for distribution.
(My script, artist and letterer found online.)
If you want to be uncivil please email me directly at 'the42n8s1@gmail.com'.
http://thefirstfivecomic.blogspot.com/
There are 17 pages of an intro story (which will be combined with 5 pages of character art) to make up a 22 page first issue. This issue is the first of a five-issue arc that I just finished the script for.
I would sincerely appreciate feedback.
Preference given to civil but brutally honest comments.
Basically I want to know if everything makes sense (it makes perfect sense in my head), if what you see is compelling enough to make you want to read Issue #2, and if its worth printing up copies for distribution.
(My script, artist and letterer found online.)
If you want to be uncivil please email me directly at 'the42n8s1@gmail.com'.